NaNoWriMo Finale

Though I had done better than I feared, I still came up short of the 50,000 word mark.

Though I had done better than I feared, I still came up short of the 50,000 word mark. My total is 34,456 words. I would like to cite a 30-day month (instead of 31) which includes a major holiday break, plus personal distractions as the reasons for not reaching the goal, but in the end I didn’t manage the time well and allowed myself endless revisioning before moving on.

Will I do it again next year? I hope I’m done well before then.

Hope you fared better! How did it go?

Finished The Winter Queen

In The Winter Queen, Erast Fandorin’s instincts don’t quite compensate for his inexperience.

Cover of The Winter Queen.
In The Winter Queen, Erast Fandorin’s instincts don’t quite compensate for his inexperience. Fandorin senses there is more to a student’s public suicide in the Alexander Gardens, but he is unprepared for where his suspicions lead him. Now finding himself in an ever-widening conspiracy, the young sleuth must travel across Europe to discover the truth, nab the villain and escape with his life.

Russian names aside (they’re a mouthful for me), Boris Akunin’s writing is clear and clean with wonderful details in all the right places. The humor is charming and the twists are numerous. I enjoyed meeting Akunin’s strange characters — even lamenting the demises of some of Fandorin’s adversaries. The Winter Queen is a terrific detective story and I’m eager to pick up the next Fandorin adventure.

Have you read it? What do you think?

Top Vampire Novels

Apropos of Halloween tomorrow and as follow up to my earlier post on Top Vampire Movies, I’m listing here my favorite vampire novels.

Apropos of Halloween tomorrow and as a follow up to my earlier post on Top Vampire Movies, I’m listing here my favorite vampire novels.

  • Let the Right One In by John Lindqvist  (most frightening story I’ve ever read)
  • Sunglasses After Dark by Nancy Collins
  • Fledgling by Octavia Butler
  • Bloodsucking Fiends and the sequel You Suck by Christopher Moore
  • Dracula by Bram Stoker

What are your favorites?

NaNoWriMo

In addition to the panelists at the Writing Show last night, there was a representative for NaNoWriMo — National Novel Writing Month.

In addition to the panelists at the Writing Show last night, there was a representative for NaNoWriMo — National Novel Writing Month. I had first heard of this event last year but didn’t participate. It’s held every November, challenging all (non-)writers to write 50,000 words beginning midnight Nov. 1 through 11:59 Nov. 30.

Learn more at the NaNoWriMo website. There appears to be a lot useful stuff there, including pep talks and community support. I intend to sign up and give it a shot. It may be the kick in the tuchas I need.

Will you participate this year? Have you in the past? What was your experience?

Jean Anderson, the Municipal Liaison for NaNoWriMo here in Richmond was on hand to answer questions.
Jean Anderson, the Municipal Liaison for NaNoWriMo here in Richmond was on hand to answer questions.

JRW Writing Show: A Little Help from my Friends

Tonight’s James River Writers Writing Show focused on writing groups.

Tonight’s James River Writers Writing Show focused on writing groups. Fittingly, all the members of our writing group showed up (a first!).

The Show’s panelists included authors Carolyn Parkhurst (The Dogs of Babel), Leslie Pietrzyk (A Year and a Day) and Susann Cokal (Breath and Bones). Poet and novelist Virginia Pye moderated the discussion.

Panelists discuss their thoughts on writing groups.
Panelists discuss their thoughts on writing groups. Left-to-right: Moderator Virginia Pye, novelists Leslie Pietrzyk, Carolyn Parkhurst and Susann Cokal.

From my notes I wrote that Pietrzyk begins her novels with a question that she can’t answer and a paradox — two things that are each true but cannot be true together. The first part resonated with me. That is, what is the central question in my novel? It isn’t the approach I took — my novel had begun with the characters, but still I think it’s worth examining. So that’s some homework for me.

I also took to heart Cokal’s suggestion that when your work is critiqued, do not immediately make revisions to incorporate them. Keep writing forward, rather than stopping to go back and revise. I am doing that now (revisions) and I don’t like it, though I feel that I must. I want to finish a complete draft. It seems forever out of reach.

When the topic of research came up, I liked Cokal’s remark that reserch is her chance to experience the world of her novel. They all agreed that a few vivid and true details can be all that is necessary to convince the reader that you have been to a place you never visited, but the moment the reader catches you in something implausible, then you may lose them.

I was happy to spot Steve from Fountain Books. I had the opportunity to thank him for his recommendation. Then we discussed The Magicians, which we both liked. He seemed to agree with my point about being a magician is akin to being an alcoholic in Grossman’s novel.

I’m following up this post with NaNoWriMo (hopefully tomorrow if not tonight).